Way too short
The animation is good, but it should have been longer
Way too short
The animation is good, but it should have been longer
For a stand alone animation- yes
But this is intended for a collab so it's meant to be short.
A bit rushed
From what i saw, i can say that you have potential. I kinda liked your drawing style, but this coulda have been much, much better. I think it was kinda rushed, and the animation is way too random. I'm sure that if you put some effort in it, increasing the details, coloring and decreasing the randomness, you can surely make high quality animation.
Good luck to you in your future works ;)
By the way, I voted 5/5
Thanks a lot for putting time in to critique .o.
Pretty much anything after this is going to be polished up quite a bit, And thanks for the 5.
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